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Another Man: Flash fiction by Tony Ogunlowo


I normally come home late at night these days. A change in my circumstances has brought about a change in my habits.

My wife is home, too, and despite the late hour she is not tucked up in bed fast asleep. In fact, she’s very much awake; seated in front of her dresser mirror in one of her finest dresses, she’s applying makeup.

I don’t recall us going out tonight but I don’t ask her. I just sat on the corner of the bed watching her. She totally ignored me like I didn’t exist and carried on doing what she was doing. Well that’s women for you.

The chime of the doorbell jolted her from what she was doing. She got up and headed for the front door. I followed closely behind at a safe distance.

She didn’t bother to ask who was at the door and unlocked it rather excitedly. It was as if she was expecting a visitor this late at night.

The door creaked open and a man stepped in. A man! He was dressed to kill; suit, shirt and tie and well-polished shoes. He carried a bottle of expensive wine and was smiling from ear to ear.

Before my very eyes they embraced and kissed; not a quick peck on the cheek but the full works. I cringed, embarrassed, and then I became angry; another man kissing my wife?

I’m not the violent sort so I held my peace. And even if I was violent it wouldn’t have made any difference.

Still ignoring my presence they sashayed into the living room entwined like two cats at play.

I followed them in and for the first time I noticed that the dining table had been set for two with a solitary candle burning in the middle.

By now my wife had dimmed the lights and it was eerily dark, and romantic, ‘cept for the illumination coming from the candle and the flashing lights of the T.V.

I stood by the furthest wall watching silently. And unless they had a trained eye I was lost in the shadows.

Another man? How could she? She knows I always come back home late at night.

She came back from the kitchen holding two wine glasses and a corkscrew. The man took the corkscrew from her and proceeded to open the bottle of wine. In his clumsiness he knocked over a framed photograph on the table beside him. It fell to the floor with a dull thud.

She knelt down and picked it up, pausing for a few seconds to look at it. It wasn’t broken and she wiped it clean with the sleeve end of her dress before putting it back where it belonged.

‘Who is that in the photo?’ asked the man noticing the sudden change in her mood as she picked up the photograph.

She stood up, straightened her dress and seemed to wipe away an errant tear.

‘That was my late husband…’ she said, sadly. ’He died in a car crash a year ago’.



Tony Ogunlowo
Tony Ogunlowo
Tony Ogunlowo is a London-based writer and author of fifteen books spanning poetry collections, plays, short-story collections, novels and novellas. As a prolific columnist his articles are syndicated throughout Nigeria and the rest of the world, published on blogs, print newspapers and magazines and websites. His short stories and flash fiction have been broadcast over the BBC and Smooth 98.1 FM #thetalesatnightime and his pidgin English poetry is studied as part of the Nigerian Open University English Literature course EN214.


  1. A phantom husband I see or rather the concept of Africans “Spirit husband” who is on the watch on her dear wife. Not knowing what he was he assumes the his husbandship daily.

    Only to realised this day what he probably had been.

    well written in comprehensive diction coupled with suspense to it flows.

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