Fade Vision

[truedreams]

The sky wakes with the bright eyes
and sight is dark to see the rare day
pregnant cloud had partial abortion
for the pressure exert from cruel sun

silly hour runs behind moon,later lays
on the wing of day,berates ray
song of bird disturbs,bade the meritorious memory of rain
gently gentle thunder strikes,cracks the rocky wall of vane

and use his claw to devour fresh skin of land
weaken land rose,fell like rotten mango fall on hand
and passed away,died grasses rose,mourn
protested to go to land of death
and achy sky roared,dancing to the song of wrath
hungry bat went back to the nest of thrust
with angry face,impression look,battered its daft

[dayo Phillips-arogbokun]

Truedreams, i must acknowledge your capital use of personification and complex imagery. suffice to say however, your language is wrought with a resonating inference nestling your thoughts in an enveloping form which manages to tell a story in a subtle manner.