‘Window 8’: A day at Walter Carrington – A Short Story by Eghosa Imasuen
- By Eghosa Imasuen
- Published January 8, 2009
- Fiction
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Eghosa Imasuen
Eghosa Imasuen, a Nigerian novelist, was born on 19 May 1976. He has had his short fiction published in online magazines like blackbiro.com, http://African-writing.com, http://africanwriter.com, and thenewgong.com; and has written articles for Farafina Magazine. His first novel, To Saint Patrick, an Alternate History murder mystery about Nigeria's civil war, was published by Farafina in 2008 to critical acclaim. He was a member of the 9 writers, 4 cities book tour that was concluded in early June 2009 in Nigeria and was named 'writer of the festival' at the 2009 Lagos Books and Art Festival. He is also a medical doctor and lives in Benin City, Nigeria, with his wife and twin sons.
I
felt sad tearing it down again, “Although come to think of it, they might not
be so nice. You know, you’re like someone who’d fit right in over there. They
might just decide that you’d be too comfortable there and not come back.”
“Don’t,”
Dreadlocks pleaded.
I
continued, “But it’s true. All you need are a few deep tribal marks, an Agbada
and a bush accent. With that they know the cold will quickly send you scurrying
back.” We all laughed. Tearing, holding our sides and drawing attention to
ourselves. This was something Nosa had warned me against. He had said on the
drive down, “You know these Americans. They might be watching everyone in there
with the surveillance cameras. No need to talk to anyone. Just wait for your
turn and leave.” Lovable idiot. Nosa spent too much time watching that Jack
Bauer TV series. He had fried his brains paranoid.
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We found seats. They had started
calling in the non-immigrant visa applicants. I was in batch six, number
eighteen. I sat between my new friends. Bini-boy had actually been born in
Warri. His father was a Shell retiree and he had been visiting the states on
and off for the last ten years. Bini-boy’s last visit was in early 2001. He
said he saw the significance. This was his first application for a visa to the
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We
waited and we were called into the inner room. I could barely see now. It was
twelve p.m. and I was hungry. We took out places on the array of musical chairs
I had seen earlier. The freckled oyibo was talking to a short girl, “Why do you
want to study nursing in the
Stupid question, I thought, not fully grasping
what I was seeing as the Nigerian answered, “I’ve always wanted to study
nursing and I know that the best place for that will be in
“What
does your father do?” What was wrong with this oyibo, now? Let this girl go and
do her interview.
“He’s a retired Brigadier-General. He runs a
farm in
“It
states here that you’re in the
It
was then it hit me. This was not a preview of the interview. This was no
further check of our documents. This was the interview proper. A buxom woman
beside me shook her head in pity for the stuttering teenager that Freckles was
browbeating. My heart reached out to her. We were in public for God’s sake.
Show us some respect, please. Freckles didn’t hear me.
“I’m sorry but you don’t qualify for this
visa,” Freckles said. “Any questions you have will be answered by this letter,”
she said as she handed a piece of paper over to the girl.
“But
you haven’t seen my documents.”
“Oh
. . . You Nigerians can produce any document.” Kai!
“Can
I appeal?” the poor Brigadier’s daughter asked.
“No.
You can reapply but I must warn you that your chances of success are severely
limited unless something significant changes in your situation”
The
girl left. It was shocking. In public. But did I expect the oyibo to know about
the conditions we lived under? The girl she had just broken probably wanted to
study medicine all along. She was probably a victim of the Education Minister’s
convoluted counter to the corruption laden joint matriculation exams Nigerian
boys and girls had to take: Post UME Tests. Maybe she took the first course
that was available. Didn’t Freckles see the person she was denying a visa? Was
she a terrorist? Was she a fraudster?
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Sliding
over chairs ever closer to the glass windows, I slowly let go. Somehow I did
not care anymore if I got the visa or not. I was exhausted. I was hungry. Everything seemed bigger. Who was I kidding? Of course I wanted to go
to
“How
old are you?”
“About
twenty-three.”
“About?”
“Twenty-three.
I am twenty three years old.”
“It
says here that you’re applying for a student visa to resume at
“Yes.”
“. .
. and that you finished high school in 1997?”
“Yes.”
“How
old where you when you finished high school?”
“. . .”
“Sir,
how old were you when you finished high school?”
“About
fifteen.”
“About?”
“Fifteen.
I was fifteen years old when I finished secondary school.”
“But
. . . Anyway, you’ve got your math wrong. I’m afraid you do not qualify for
this visa. Any questions you have will be answered in this letter. You can
reapply but I must advise you that your application will be refused if nothing
changes in your situation.”
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Beside
the grizzly bear’s cubicle, a middle aged matronly oyibo with the kindest eyes
was interviewing a tall fair boy.
“So
why do you want to study in the
“I
want to go to the
“Who
told you to say that?”
“Ma?”
“I
said, who told you to say that?”
“No
one, ma.”
“Okay . . . . So what do you plan on doing
when you graduate?”
“When
I graduate I want to return to my great country and motherland,
“Stop
it!”
“Sorry,
ma.”
“If
I want you to read from the script you’ve already memorized, I’ll ask you to.”
“. .
.”
“Who
will be paying for your tuition?”
“My
maternal uncle. My maternal uncle, who happens to be my mother’s immediate
younger brother, believes in the value of an education from the great and
magnanimous country of
“I’m
sorry you don’t qualify for this visa. Any questions you have will be answered
by this letter. You are welcome to reapply but I . . .”
“Wetin
be that? Wetin you mean? You no go give me visa? For my country? For
“Security!
Security!”
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It
was really very sad. But wetin
concern Agbero with overload. My problems were with thinking of
answers to my questions. My only prayer was not to meet the freckled demon. She
must have been the one I had heard so much about. The one who bounced Chuka
with only three questions. I wanted Grizzly. I wanted Mama Goose. I wanted
Condi Rice herself. Anyone but Freckles. I made another friend at the musical
chairs. She was number seventeen on my batch. She was the buxom woman who shook
her head at Freckles’ first victim. Buxom girl was more like it. I found out
that she was a doctor who trained in the US but had been convinced to come home
four years ago so she’d be more likely to catch a husband from her part of the
country. She had not. She was working now in the
“Uniben
Guys are doing well over there in
“Never
felt the need to travel,” I replied.
“Why
are you travelling now?”
“I’m
going to spend the end of the summer with my aunt. She’s a Professor of
Literature in a
“Ah
. . . a novelist and a doctor. How do you manage?”
“A
doctor and a woman. How do you manage?”
“You
know, I never know which the full time job is. Being a woman in this country or
treating people.”
“Next
to window eight?” Oh shit. It was Freckles beckoning on me.
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I
got up from my seat and walked towards her – my heart beating like a drum in an
Atilogwu dance competition. I swallowed spit. She was pretty. Her freckles
looked like unsightly blemishes to my African eyes but one could not deny her
good bone structure. She had a straight symmetrical face. Which she kept fixed
on the LCD screen to her left as she asked me, “Your Passport, proof of hundred
dollar payment and application form?”
I
handed these to her and waited. She flipped through my passports, the 1980 one
and the 2005 one. She paused at the Gatwick airport stamp and asked, “How long
have you been working as a doctor?”
Ehen,
now we were talking. “Six years,” I said. I had my two-by-four envelope partly
open. I was prepared to pull out about five pages of documents chronicling my
short professional career in officialese. Keep on asking, dear, I thought, and I’ll keep on answering.
“Have
you been out of the country before?”
“Yes,”
I replied. What was all this? Couldn’t she see the stamp on the old passport?
When was she going to get to the real question? Ask me why you should believe I’m coming back, I willed her
to ask me.
“And that was in 1980? When you were four
years old?”
“Yes.”
Ask me why you should believe I’m
coming back.
She turned towards the computer screen and
started typing. “Are you married?”
“No.”
Ask me why you should believe I’m coming back.
“I’m
sorry but you do not qualify for this visa. Any questions you have . . .
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As I
walked out of the building in the poetically apt rain, I looked at the stamp on
my passport- application received- and thought, three monosyllabic answers and poof! Chuka was right.
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